Monday, December 12, 2011

titles

Please think of ten creative and inviting titles for this poem. Try to peak the interest of your reader while still maintaining the purpose of the poem in your title.



I wake in the dark and remember
it is the morning when I must start
by myself on the journey
I lie listening to the black hour
before dawn and you are
still asleep beside me while
around us the trees full of night lean
hushed in their dream that bears
us up asleep and awake then I hear
drops falling one by one into
the sightless leaves and I
do not know when they began but
all at once there is no sound but rain
and the stream below us roaring
away into the rushing darkness

5 comments:

  1. -Dawn of Darkness
    -Black hour
    -When the rain began (best)
    -midnight journey
    -Comforting rain

    Kyle

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  2. Destiny
    Needs
    Dawn
    Mysteries
    Dreams
    Rushing Towards the End
    The Rain is Still Heard
    The Remembering
    Forgeing In the Darkness
    The Beginning of the End

    Nic

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  3. - Life in the Darkness
    - The Journey
    - The Start
    - Moving Forward
    - Together in the Darkness
    - What Happened that Night
    - Not Alone
    - Forgetting the Past
    - What is to come?
    - Remembering the Past

    Cyrus

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  4. -A vague memory
    -awake at in the dark
    -The sound of nature
    -There then gone
    -Deja vu
    -Beside me
    -When I wake up
    -Alone, but with company
    -my journey to work and back
    -Cold, and tired

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  5. 1. Darkness
    2. Away into the Rushing Darkness
    3. A Journey to Remember
    4. The Black Hour
    5. The Black Hour Before Dawn
    6. Before Dawn
    7. A Journey to Remember
    8. Awake in the Dark
    9. No One But Me
    10. Rushing Darkness

    -Alison

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