Please think of ten creative and inviting titles for this poem. Try to peak the interest of your reader while still maintaining the purpose of the poem in your title.
I wake in the dark and remember
it is the morning when I must start
by myself on the journey
I lie listening to the black hour
before dawn and you are
still asleep beside me while
around us the trees full of night lean
hushed in their dream that bears
us up asleep and awake then I hear
drops falling one by one into
the sightless leaves and I
do not know when they began but
all at once there is no sound but rain
and the stream below us roaring
away into the rushing darkness
it is the morning when I must start
by myself on the journey
I lie listening to the black hour
before dawn and you are
still asleep beside me while
around us the trees full of night lean
hushed in their dream that bears
us up asleep and awake then I hear
drops falling one by one into
the sightless leaves and I
do not know when they began but
all at once there is no sound but rain
and the stream below us roaring
away into the rushing darkness
-Dawn of Darkness
ReplyDelete-Black hour
-When the rain began (best)
-midnight journey
-Comforting rain
Kyle
Destiny
ReplyDeleteNeeds
Dawn
Mysteries
Dreams
Rushing Towards the End
The Rain is Still Heard
The Remembering
Forgeing In the Darkness
The Beginning of the End
Nic
- Life in the Darkness
ReplyDelete- The Journey
- The Start
- Moving Forward
- Together in the Darkness
- What Happened that Night
- Not Alone
- Forgetting the Past
- What is to come?
- Remembering the Past
Cyrus
-A vague memory
ReplyDelete-awake at in the dark
-The sound of nature
-There then gone
-Deja vu
-Beside me
-When I wake up
-Alone, but with company
-my journey to work and back
-Cold, and tired
1. Darkness
ReplyDelete2. Away into the Rushing Darkness
3. A Journey to Remember
4. The Black Hour
5. The Black Hour Before Dawn
6. Before Dawn
7. A Journey to Remember
8. Awake in the Dark
9. No One But Me
10. Rushing Darkness
-Alison