Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Please try to finish this poem as creatively as possible.



The darkness closes in
He hears the floorboards creek
he throws the covers over him
as the shadows start to speak

5 comments:

  1. Nervously shaking he stays under the covers
    Silent as he can be while in fright
    The shadows stop speaking
    Everything is a blur can't remebering what happened
    Ashley

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  2. he did whut they whonted him to do
    when they soped speeking he found himself in the middle of the woods
    Nate

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  3. he listens to them in fear
    wondering if there near
    while shadowing his face
    they come closer to the bed
    wishing they were gone
    did something go wrong
    he hears them creep away
    did he get his way
    emelie

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  4. the darkness closes in
    he hears the floorboards creek
    he throws the covers over him
    as the shadows start to speak
    voices swirl in his mind
    he wonders whats going on?
    this lost little child
    all alone in the dark
    they're telling him to do good
    and they're telling him to do bad
    he's just a lost little boy
    not knowing right from wrong
    a lost thought
    a fallen tear
    who would do this to a young child?
    no one but the unknown.

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  5. The darkness closes in
    He hears the floorboards creek
    He throws the covers over him
    As the shadows start to speak
    His ears start to tingle
    His mind becomes numb
    His muscles seize up
    The darkness swallows him whole
    His screams become faint
    As the darkness closes in
    A white figure appears at the door way
    Could this be...
    Chad

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