As she deeply looks at her future her past show, of what use to be and what will never be again.Her consentration on this man shows her evil side, it shows the darkness inside. Planning her revenge in a deep thought in a still movement, studing his every move, learning his every weakness. Just waiting to strike at any moment, a soon as he lets down his frount and his back is ready for her deadly ambush... -Erin
As she looks past the man she looked at a boy he was young. She looked and looked but yet didnt know who it was. She then saw a lady walk up to the boy. It was her mother, what was she doing with the little boy. She was running to her but a man stoped her. He said " she cant see you no one can". " But why" the man said " you are dead". As looked at her mom she cried. Looking at her mother she watched her walk away to the train with a young boy and a man. Could it be her family that she ran away from last year. She looked back the man was gone she wanted to know how this happenend, or how long was she dead for. She walked away like nothing had just happenend....-Dominika
Behind all of the crowds is one lonely,colorful girl. She stands in the middle of all the crazieness waiting too be noticed. She stands there doing nothing but thinking and looking back on her better days.Finnaly someone in the crowd asks "hey, what are you doing" she notices it but doesnt quite acknolege it. Before she wouldve been happy that someone has noticed, but now she has given up and doesn't bother to do anything about it.
The man kept his head down for the most part. At least until the girl walked by. He rose from his seat, adjusted his sunglasses, and began to walk towards her. She ran, seeming to know his intentions were not good. he chased her, never seeming to lose his breath. She reached the edge of the road and stopped, waiting for him to get there. when he did he stopped too late, as she swung her fist right into the side of hiss jaw. he spun around spitting out crimson shimmering blood. he turned towards her and grinned, an ominous condemning grin, ensuring her that the struggle was not over. he grabbed her shoulder, her skin turning white, the blood rushing away. she pulled and pushed and kicked, but no amount of force could remove his grasp. he began to drag her back towards where they had came, tears streaking the blue paint on her face. no one paid any attention to the scene, and she was captured. Jordan H.
The guy just sat there in his wifebeater drinking his coffe. He heard someone loudly pulling a chair back to sit down. The man had forgotten to take his sunglasses off when walked in ut he didn't. He just wanted to sit there alone and in the shadows. He started to turn his head very slowly to see what type of person was sitting behind him. As he started to turn, he noticewd the girl had lots of blue eye shadow on. He had turned because of the feeling something awful was about to happen, and he had the feeling the he was the target. Then in a matter of seconds the mysterious girl behind him came and sat down with him. She just sat there staring into the sunglasses of the this strange young guy. Though she didn't mind, because she knew who this guy was. This guy is here long lost brother and he doesn't know it.
As she deeply looks at her future her past show, of what use to be and what will never be again.Her consentration on this man shows her evil side, it shows the darkness inside. Planning her revenge in a deep thought in a still movement, studing his every move, learning his every weakness. Just waiting to strike at any moment, a soon as he lets down his frount and his back is ready for her deadly ambush... -Erin
ReplyDeleteAs she looks past the man she looked at a boy he was young. She looked and looked but yet didnt know who it was. She then saw a lady walk up to the boy. It was her mother, what was she doing with the little boy. She was running to her but a man stoped her. He said " she cant see you no one can". " But why" the man said " you are dead". As looked at her mom she cried. Looking at her mother she watched her walk away to the train with a young boy and a man. Could it be her family that she ran away from last year. She looked back the man was gone she wanted to know how this happenend, or how long was she dead for. She walked away like nothing had just happenend....-Dominika
ReplyDeleteBehind all of the crowds is one lonely,colorful girl. She stands in the middle of all the crazieness waiting too be noticed. She stands there doing nothing but thinking and looking back on her better days.Finnaly someone in the crowd asks "hey, what are you doing" she notices it but doesnt quite acknolege it. Before she wouldve been happy that someone has noticed, but now she has given up and doesn't bother to do anything about it.
ReplyDeleteThe man kept his head down for the most part. At least until the girl walked by. He rose from his seat, adjusted his sunglasses, and began to walk towards her. She ran, seeming to know his intentions were not good. he chased her, never seeming to lose his breath. She reached the edge of the road and stopped, waiting for him to get there. when he did he stopped too late, as she swung her fist right into the side of hiss jaw. he spun around spitting out crimson shimmering blood. he turned towards her and grinned, an ominous condemning grin, ensuring her that the struggle was not over. he grabbed her shoulder, her skin turning white, the blood rushing away. she pulled and pushed and kicked, but no amount of force could remove his grasp. he began to drag her back towards where they had came, tears streaking the blue paint on her face. no one paid any attention to the scene, and she was captured. Jordan H.
ReplyDeleteThe guy just sat there in his wifebeater drinking his coffe. He heard someone loudly pulling a chair back to sit down. The man had forgotten to take his sunglasses off when walked in ut he didn't. He just wanted to sit there alone and in the shadows. He started to turn his head very slowly to see what type of person was sitting behind him. As he started to turn, he noticewd the girl had lots of blue eye shadow on. He had turned because of the feeling something awful was about to happen, and he had the feeling the he was the target. Then in a matter of seconds the mysterious girl behind him came and sat down with him. She just sat there staring into the sunglasses of the this strange young guy. Though she didn't mind, because she knew who this guy was. This guy is here long lost brother and he doesn't know it.
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